Keeping that cinquain formatting for today. Still exploring contents of the drawer. What might be fun in revision is to try a “garland cinquain” form wherein six cinquains are linked together with the sixth being made up of lines from the other five. Line one from cinquain one, line two from cinquain two. . .
Crayons,
a brand new box.
I open up the flap.
Every color is standing tall
pointing.
Comics,
just a couple.
I read them quietly
and dream of life in Riverdale,
teen-aged.
Candy
in a paper sack
from a quick trip downtown.
Choosing one kind was difficult.
So sweet.